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I'm the Expert

Write a detailed, step-by-step guide explaining how to do something you know well. It could be playing a game, a sport, or any activity you are familiar with. Make sure to include all the necessary steps and details to help someone else understand and follow your instructions.

Level 1:
- Knowledge: Demonstrates limited knowledge of the steps and details required to complete the activity.
- Communication: Communicates with limited clarity and organization, making it difficult for the reader to follow the instructions.
- Application: Applies limited procedural writing techniques, with frequent errors and omissions.

Level 2:
- Knowledge: Demonstrates some knowledge of the steps and details needed, but key elements may be missing or unclear.
- Communication: Communicates with some clarity and organization, though instructions may be somewhat confusing or incomplete.
- Application: Applies some procedural writing techniques, but errors may impede understanding.

Level 3:
- Knowledge: Demonstrates considerable knowledge and understanding of the steps and details required to complete the activity.
- Communication: Communicates with considerable clarity and organization, allowing the reader to follow the instructions with few difficulties.
- Application: Applies procedural writing techniques with considerable effectiveness, minor errors may be present but do not significantly impair understanding.

Level 4:
- Knowledge: Demonstrates thorough knowledge and understanding of the steps and intricate details required to complete the activity.
- Communication: Communicates with a high degree of clarity and organization, making the instructions easy to follow and engaging.
- Application: Applies procedural writing techniques with a high degree of effectiveness, with no errors that impede understanding.

Level 4.5:
- Knowledge: Demonstrates comprehensive and insightful understanding of the steps and nuances of the activity, providing additional tips or insights.
- Communication: Communicates with exceptional clarity and a sophisticated organizational structure, engaging and guiding the reader effortlessly.
- Application: Applies procedural writing techniques with exceptional effectiveness, with no errors and includes enhancements that enrich the reader's understanding.

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mikayla

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Liam

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Once upon a time there was a guy named Seth he was so bad at basketball that he couldn't even make a layup. He wanted to be just like a guy named Liam, Liam was so good at basketball that he could mak...

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Owen

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Seth

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it starts with parzevel and h planing a chat room and the height five talked about ioi and how they found the first key and made a

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Bryn

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how to go to sleep step one get a bed and then get some sleeping clothes. go to your bathroom and brush your teeth and then go to the tolet. go back up stare and go to your bed and lift the cover and ...

The student has attempted to outline steps for going to sleep, but there are significant areas for improvement. Strengths: The student has identified some basic steps involved in preparing for sleep, such as getting a bed and brushing teeth. Areas for Growth: The instructions lack clarity and organization, making it difficult to follow. For example, the phrase 'go back up stare' is unclear and should be revised for clarity. Additionally, there are frequent spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'tolet' instead of 'toilet' and 'confy' instead of 'comfy'. Next Steps: To improve, the student should focus on organizing the steps in a logical sequence and ensuring each step is clearly explained. They should also proofread their work to correct spelling and grammatical errors. Practicing writing with more detail and using transitional words can help enhance clarity and flow.



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Knowledge: Level 1.5
Communication: Level 1
Application: Level 1

ar

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Sarena

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In order to learn how to make the perfect pizza you first would have

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Aubrey

63 words

What I am doing is volleyball you start the game with a serve and then it goes over and then someone get the ball up to the seter and then the seter sets the ball to a nother person and then they smas...

Your work shows an understanding of the basic sequence of actions in volleyball, which is a good start. However, an area for growth is in the clarity and detail of your explanation. For example, the sentence 'and then they smash it in the other persons face and then that goes on for ever in till the ball hits the ground' could be clearer and more precise. Consider breaking down the steps further and using more specific volleyball terminology. Next step: Try to organize your instructions into clear, numbered steps and use proper volleyball terms like 'serve', 'set', and 'spike' to enhance clarity and understanding.



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Knowledge: Level 1.5
Communication: Level 1
Application: Level 1

Brooklyn

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I am the expert at skipping class because Mr liscombe is helping people and I will sneak out of class and go into the washroom for 10 minutes or more because I'm bored. I also will just randomly walk ...

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Katalia

124 words

Making pancakes- Mix the pancake mix (flour, sugar, baking powder, eggs and more) with either water or milk in a medium or large bowl. But while you're mixing that, place your frying or non-stick pan ...

Your instructions for making pancakes show a good start with some clear steps, such as mixing the ingredients and preparing the pan. This demonstrates some knowledge of the process. An area for growth is in the clarity and organization of your instructions. For example, the sentence 'Then when the pancakes turn into a light brown then it's ready to take out of the pan and into a plate' could be clearer. Consider revising for better flow and clarity. Next step: Focus on organizing your instructions in a step-by-step format and check for grammatical errors to improve clarity and effectiveness.



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Knowledge: Level 2
Communication: Level 2
Application: Level 2

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