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Free Write

Write a narrative piece on a topic of your choice. Your story should be around 200 words and demonstrate your knowledge of the topic. Use descriptive language to engage your readers and ensure that your writing follows proper language conventions.

[KNOWLEDGE]
Subject Matter
- L1: Demonstrates limited knowledge of the topic.
- L2: Demonstrates some knowledge of the topic.
- L3: Demonstrates considerable knowledge of the topic.
- L4: Demonstrates thorough knowledge of the topic.

[THINKING]
Planning Skills
- L1: Shows limited planning and organization of ideas.
- L2: Shows some planning and organization of ideas.
- L3: Shows considerable planning and organization of ideas.
- L4: Shows thorough planning and organization of ideas.

[COMMUNICATION]
Expression of Ideas
- L1: Expresses ideas with limited clarity and detail.
- L2: Expresses ideas with some clarity and detail.
- L3: Expresses ideas with considerable clarity and detail.
- L4: Expresses ideas with thorough clarity and detail.

[APPLICATION]
Language Conventions
- L1: Uses language conventions with limited accuracy.
- L2: Uses language conventions with some accuracy.
- L3: Uses language conventions with considerable accuracy.
- L4: Uses language conventions with thorough accuracy.

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Submissions

Seth

130 words

once upon a time there was a guy named Liam and Liam was bad at basket ball and he wanted to be just like seth. Seth was an absolute bucket and never missed but Liam never could make a shot not even...

The student demonstrates a thorough understanding of the topic by incorporating specific details about the characters and their abilities in basketball. The narrative shows some planning and organization, with a clear sequence of events, although there is room for improvement in structuring the story more cohesively. The expression of ideas is somewhat clear, but could benefit from more detail and clarity in certain areas. Language conventions need significant attention, as there are multiple errors in punctuation, capitalization, and grammar that affect the overall readability of the text.


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Knowledge: Level 4
Thinking: Level 2
Communication: Level 2
Application: Level 1

Wilson, Addalyn

0 words

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Blake

175 words

One day, me and Kayden went for a road trip to go see a Baltimore Ravens game and they were playing the Packers. We were excited because the Packers are buns and the Ravens had good players and the Pa...

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Thompson, Owen

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Levi

134 words

There was a man named legion he was well known for being a fire watch legend.He was getting up in age at 35 he was always located in the more fire known spots.it was another day at work he was looking...

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kolton

218 words

One day after school I was getting bored and it was around six O'clock and I had been watching my phone since I had been home and it had been two hours. Suddenly I get a call from my phone, after I pu...

Your narrative provides a clear sequence of events, demonstrating a good understanding of the topic. However, there are several areas where language conventions could be improved. Pay attention to punctuation and capitalization, especially at the beginning of sentences and with proper nouns. Additionally, consider varying your word choice to enhance the clarity and engagement of your writing. Overall, your planning and organization of ideas are evident, but further refinement in expression and language conventions will strengthen your writing.


--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 4
Thinking: Level 3
Communication: Level 3
Application: Level 1

ar

249 words

One Friday night Aubrey was at her house watching Gilmore girls. Her family was out at the store and Aubrey was chilling when there was a big and loud crash downstairs Aubrey goes to to check it ou...

Your story has a gripping plot that keeps the reader engaged, which is a great start! The subject matter is intriguing, and you've created a suspenseful atmosphere. To enhance your story, consider adding more details about the setting and characters to give readers a clearer picture of the scene. This will help in developing the subject matter further and make your story even more compelling.

In terms of planning skills, your narrative has a clear sequence of events, which is excellent. However, try to organize your ideas into paragraphs to improve the flow of your story. This will help readers follow the plot more easily and understand the progression of events. Additionally, consider using transitional phrases to connect your ideas smoothly.

Your expression of ideas is creative, and you have a strong voice in your writing. To improve language conventions, pay attention to grammar, spelling, and punctuation. For example, ensure that sentences are complete and check for repeated words or phrases. This will make your writing clearer and more polished. Keep practicing, and you'll continue to improve your storytelling skills!


--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 3
Thinking: Level 3
Communication: Level 3
Application: Level 2

Clara

71 words

Next week is March break and I'm gonna start the week off at a baby shower that's 4 hours away in Woodstock! Sunday I go to my Grandparents and we got to church and then home around 1:00. A usual Sund...

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McInroy-Dafoe, TJ

0 words

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Marshall, Kayden

0 words

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