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Pre March Break

Imagine you have unlimited resources at your disposal for March break. Craft a narrative about your dream vacation, detailing the places you would visit, the activities you would engage in, and the experiences you would seek. Be imaginative and elaborate on how you would make the most of this opportunity. Your story should be around 200 words.

[KNOWLEDGE]
Forms and Genres
- L1: Demonstrates limited understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L2: Demonstrates some understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L3: Demonstrates considerable understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L4: Demonstrates thorough understanding of narrative forms and genres.

[THINKING]
Planning Skills
- L1: Uses planning skills with limited effectiveness.
- L2: Uses planning skills with some effectiveness.
- L3: Uses planning skills with considerable effectiveness.
- L4: Uses planning skills with thorough effectiveness.

[COMMUNICATION]
Expression of Ideas
- L1: Expresses ideas with limited clarity and coherence.
- L2: Expresses ideas with some clarity and coherence.
- L3: Expresses ideas with considerable clarity and coherence.
- L4: Expresses ideas with thorough clarity and coherence.

[APPLICATION]
Language Conventions
- L1: Uses language conventions with limited accuracy.
- L2: Uses language conventions with some accuracy.
- L3: Uses language conventions with considerable accuracy.
- L4: Uses language conventions with thorough accuracy.

Vocabulary
- L1: Uses vocabulary with limited precision and variety.
- L2: Uses vocabulary with some precision and variety.
- L3: Uses vocabulary with considerable precision and variety.
- L4: Uses vocabulary with thorough precision and variety.

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Submissions

Seth Bell

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Wilson, Addalyn

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Whiteman, Blake

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Thompson, Owen

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Levi

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My dream vacation would be a

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Sharpe, Kolton

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Ariel

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in March break I am planning to hang out with my friends as in Fiona and Nella other then hanging out with them Im going to sleep and watch TV and go shopping. But that is all I'm planning to do.

Your writing demonstrates a good understanding of narrative forms and genres, as you clearly outline your plans for March break. However, there are several areas where you can improve your writing. Pay attention to punctuation and capitalization, especially at the beginning of sentences and with proper nouns. Additionally, try to use more precise vocabulary to enhance your expression of ideas. Finally, ensure that your sentences are clear and coherent to effectively communicate your thoughts.



--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 4
Thinking: Level 2
Communication: Level 2
Application: Level 1

Mullin, Clara

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McInroy-Dafoe, TJ

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Marshall, Kayden

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