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Free Write 2

Create a story about any topic of your choice. Your story should be around 200 words long. Make sure to use descriptive language and follow the storytelling process, including a clear beginning, middle, and end.

[KNOWLEDGE]
Forms and Genres
- L1: Demonstrates limited understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L2: Demonstrates some understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L3: Demonstrates considerable understanding of narrative forms and genres.
- L4: Demonstrates thorough understanding of narrative forms and genres.

[COMMUNICATION]
Expression of Ideas
- L1: Expresses ideas with limited clarity and coherence.
- L2: Expresses ideas with some clarity and coherence.
- L3: Expresses ideas with considerable clarity and coherence.
- L4: Expresses ideas with thorough clarity and coherence.

[APPLICATION]
Language Conventions
- L1: Uses language conventions with limited accuracy.
- L2: Uses language conventions with some accuracy.
- L3: Uses language conventions with considerable accuracy.
- L4: Uses language conventions with thorough accuracy.

Vocabulary
- L1: Uses vocabulary with limited effectiveness.
- L2: Uses vocabulary with some effectiveness.
- L3: Uses vocabulary with considerable effectiveness.
- L4: Uses vocabulary with thorough effectiveness.

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Submissions

seth

10 words

once there was a guy named Laim sucked at ba

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addy

9 words

bryns finger fell off and she died the end

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Blake

44 words

On my march break I got my dads old phone and it is fun to text my grandparents with gifs. On my phone I have Clash royale, Block blast, and this cool app that gives me all the hockey, football, baske...

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Owen

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Levi

604 words

It was 57-57 game 7 to go to the march madness tournament coming up this year Kolton from Michigan state puts up a three bang the buzzer sounds there going to march madness.The fans flood the court an...

Your narrative captures the excitement of a basketball tournament, and you've done a great job of creating a vivid scene. To enhance your storytelling, consider focusing on the structure and organization of your paragraphs. Breaking your text into smaller sections can help guide the reader through the action more smoothly. In terms of expression of ideas, you've conveyed the tension and excitement well, but adding more descriptive language could further immerse the reader in the atmosphere of the game. For example, describing the sounds, sights, and emotions of the players and fans can add depth to your narrative. Regarding language conventions, pay attention to grammar and punctuation to ensure clarity. For instance, using commas and periods appropriately can help separate ideas and make your writing easier to follow. Lastly, your vocabulary is strong, but varying your word choice can keep the reader engaged and add richness to your story.


--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 3.5
Communication: Level 3.5
Application: Level 3

kolton

192 words

I wake up to find myself in my bed, my alarm is blasting in my ear, I turn over and swipe my phone. The alarm is finally off I can breathe a sigh of relief and I grabbed my phone and check all of my m...

You've done a great job capturing a typical morning routine, which is a relatable topic for many readers. To enhance your writing, consider breaking your ideas into shorter sentences to improve clarity and flow. This will help your audience follow your story more easily. Additionally, pay attention to language conventions such as punctuation and grammar to ensure your writing is polished. Finally, try to incorporate more varied vocabulary to make your narrative more engaging and descriptive.


--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 3
Communication: Level 3
Application: Level 3

ariel

169 words

When Aubrey supposedly died. After Aubrey's mom and sisters found her died on the ground her mom calls 911 and they come rushing over and they end up taking her to the hospital. Around 10 minutes af...

You've crafted an engaging narrative that captures the reader's attention with a dramatic event. In terms of forms and genres, your story fits well within the suspense or drama genre, which is great for keeping readers interested. To enhance your expression of ideas, consider adding more descriptive details about the characters' emotions and the setting to create a vivid picture in the reader's mind. This will help your audience connect more deeply with the story. Regarding language conventions, pay attention to sentence structure and punctuation to ensure clarity and flow. For example, using commas and periods correctly can help separate ideas and make your writing easier to follow. Lastly, your vocabulary is appropriate for the grade level, but you might want to explore using more varied word choices to add depth and interest to your writing. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your storytelling skills!


--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 3
Communication: Level 3
Application: Level 3

Clara

94 words

Breslyn was a lonely, smelly, short and nerdy kid. Every day she went to her locker and grabbed her stuff for school but today Bryn her bully was waiting for her. Bryn was the popular girl at Breslyn'...

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McInroy-Dafoe, TJ

0 words

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Kayden

136 words

how my marc h break went first I went to my dads and celabriter b b b b bb b b bb b b b b b b b b b bb b vv v vv vv vv v v hm mg hg g hg mh hmg jg hg g jh mhg h h vvbbv vbv vvv v v vn nbb n...

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