The Big Picture
Watch the video linked and write a reflective response about your feelings of being a small part of the universe, like a grain of sand in the desert. Discuss how this perspective influences your mindset when addressing personal issues. Your response should be approximately 200 words. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zR3Igc3Rhfg
[KNOWLEDGE]
subjectMatter
- L1: Demonstrates limited understanding of the video's content and its themes.
- L2: Demonstrates some understanding of the video's content and its themes.
- L3: Demonstrates considerable understanding of the video's content and its themes.
- L4: Demonstrates thorough understanding of the video's content and its themes.
[THINKING]
planningSkills
- L1: Uses planning skills with limited effectiveness to organize thoughts.
- L2: Uses planning skills with some effectiveness to organize thoughts.
- L3: Uses planning skills with considerable effectiveness to organize thoughts.
- L4: Uses planning skills with thorough effectiveness to organize thoughts.
[COMMUNICATION]
expressionOfIdeas
- L1: Expresses ideas with limited clarity and coherence.
- L2: Expresses ideas with some clarity and coherence.
- L3: Expresses ideas with considerable clarity and coherence.
- L4: Expresses ideas with thorough clarity and coherence.
[APPLICATION]
languageConventions
- L1: Uses language conventions with limited accuracy.
- L2: Uses language conventions with some accuracy.
- L3: Uses language conventions with considerable accuracy.
- L4: Uses language conventions with thorough accuracy.
transferOfKnowledge
- L1: Transfers knowledge and insights with limited effectiveness to personal reflections.
- L2: Transfers knowledge and insights with some effectiveness to personal reflections.
- L3: Transfers knowledge and insights with considerable effectiveness to personal reflections.
- L4: Transfers knowledge and insights with thorough effectiveness to personal reflections.
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Submissions
Seth Bell
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Wilson, Addalyn
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Whiteman, Blake
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It's crazy to think that you are a tiny part of the universe with billions of people out there. I mean us humans don't even know what else is out there. We haven't explored any planets besides earth a...
Thompson, Owen
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Thompson, Levi
9 words
the quote makes a big difference by making people
kolton sharpe
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I think that it is crazy that the world is so small to the point where the world is microscopic. Its crazy how far the cameras get to be able to barley see the sun. Astronauts are very inspiring and i...
What to work on: You have a lot of run-on sentences, which makes it hard to understand your ideas. For example, try breaking up this long sentence into smaller ones: 'Astronauts are very inspiring and its crazy that they are brave enough to leave the world and explore the rest of the universe and the technology that helps them is really advanced its to the point where the Astronauts don't have to do a lot while they are leaving into space and the technology helps control the ship while they are leaving earth and it also helps them dispart from the spaceship.' You could stop a sentence after 'universe' and start a new one with 'The technology that helps them is really advanced.' Also, watch out for spelling mistakes like 'barley,' which should be 'barely,' and 'dispart,' which might be a mix-up for 'depart.' Remember to use 'it's' instead of 'its' when you mean 'it is.'
The Goal: For your next edit, focus on using punctuation to break down long sentences into smaller ones. This will make your ideas clearer to the reader.
--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 2.5
Thinking: Level 2.5
Communication: Level 2.5
Application: Level 2
Seymour, Ariel
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Mullin, Clara
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McInroy-Dafoe, TJ
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Marshall, Kayden
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I think its confusing because we don't know how big everything is so we could be way smaller then we think so i don't know but I don't really care much about