cars
Write an expository piece about cars. Discuss their history, how they work, and their impact on society. Aim for around 200 words.
[KNOWLEDGE]
Subject Matter
- L1: Demonstrates limited understanding of cars, their history, and impact on society.
- L2: Demonstrates some understanding of cars, their history, and impact on society.
- L3: Demonstrates considerable understanding of cars, their history, and impact on society.
- L4: Demonstrates thorough understanding of cars, their history, and impact on society.
[APPLICATION]
Language Conventions
- L1: Uses language conventions with limited accuracy and effectiveness.
- L2: Uses language conventions with some accuracy and effectiveness.
- L3: Uses language conventions with considerable accuracy and effectiveness.
- L4: Uses language conventions with thorough accuracy and effectiveness.
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Submissions
sara
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cars is very important for everyone because they help us get to work and school but some people drive to much and it hurts the enviroment. the engine uses gas and it burns it to make power but sometim...
What to work on: There are a few run-on sentences in your writing. A run-on sentence is when two complete ideas are put together without punctuation. For example, 'cars is very important for everyone because they help us get to work and school but some people drive to much and it hurts the environment' can be broken into two sentences like this: 'Cars are very important for everyone because they help us get to work and school. But some people drive too much, and it hurts the environment.' Also, watch out for spelling mistakes like 'enviroment' (environment), 'doesnt' (doesn't), 'familys' (families), and 'its' (it's).
The Goal: Next time, try to use periods more often to separate your ideas into clear sentences. Pay attention to spelling, especially for words that you use often. This will make your writing easier to read.
--- Assessment Summary ---
Knowledge: Level 2.5
Application: Level 2